All Comments on 'A Dusty Manuscript Ch. 03'

Ooh! Steff and Ray could come over for dinner. Ray and Steff could get controlled at the same time. It could be set up that Ray won’t know. What a lever to hold over your best bud.

At the beginning of this chapter you commented about the pandemic throwing up obstacles. I have thrown up food, liquor, blood and even bile but I have never thrown up an obstacle. I wonder how you eat one before you throw it up. And now back to our review, just like the other chapters, I have found this to be unusual but incredibly interesting. I keep trying to figure out what the end game will actually be but after each chapter, it throws me off which I suppose is what a good story will do. I continue to look forward to more but I am going to stop trying to figure out the end since it just gets aggravating when I am constantly incorrect. Still comes across as a fiver in the star ratings though.

You eat obstacles with a bit of barbecue sauce and a side of coleslaw, of course. :-)

Thanks Anonymous!

I cant wait until the next chapter. This is a fun series so far.

It's a massive turn off bringing Ray in. I understand being mad about his wife wanting to leave but why let her fuck other people because of it. Maybe it is just because I am not a cuckold that I can't enjoy this shit. Let me not even talk about the foolishness that was making him tell someone he could mind control people. I think I am just going use hentai foundry from now on. Literotica has too much cuck energy.

Stupidity on a gigantic level. Telling another people a offering his women. I couldn't finish the chapter. Goodbye.

Pathetic puss bag.