by Insufficient
Wow! Oh my goodness... dear Mandy has gotten herself into heaps of non-stop excitement and humiliation! You took me by surprise at the very end! Sexy and superb writing, Insufficient! I am craving more; not just about David, but with Alex now, too! Oh, my!
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Having read this a dozen times I've read it yet again. The third page of this chapter is truly terrific.
You just keep right on humiliating Mandy. I like the way your mind works. Good job.
These stories are truly addictive. Mandy's feeling that she is in control and then loosing it - events, people taking over. Very, very sexy.
I hope the hiatus is successful for your sake (and quick for ours!!) Can't wait until the series can continue.
I have very much enjoyed the 3 chapters so far.
Smokin'!
I can't wait to read about David's reaction to the photos.
I hope there's lots more to come from you. This is excellent!!!
Very interesting story, went in a different direction than I anticipated, looking forward to the next chapter..
Good point about the names! I will try to take this into account in future chapters by downplaying some of the similarly named characters.
This is nicely done - I am very much enjoying the story and am keen to see where Megan goes from here. Is Megan going to be tempted to push herself some more? Or is someone else going to step in and take advantage of her now?
I found the names a little confusing Megan and Mandy, Alex and Andrew starting with the same letter so I had to read the chapter twice to get who was who straight in my head.
Great piece of writing Insufficent, I hope you are motivated to continue.