All Comments on 'A Gift from My Wife'

Good first story

nice! Thank You!

Nice fantasy

Good story line. Needs to be cleaned up, grammatically speaking. Consider having someone proof read it for you. Thank you for sharing.

Grammar and spelling are all over the place, right from the first sentence to the last.

"a bit of a voyeuristic"?

Don't you know thedifference between an adjective and a noun?

I'll abstain from voting. But his wife having tattoos ruined it for me. I stopped reading right there.

Just from the first several lines of the story, your writing technique seems to be somewhere between adequate and okay. Good luck with your future endeavors.

Secy hot suprise . Nicely written loved it. Thankyou.

Excellent first entry. I think future stories would benefit from a proofreader, my DMs are open if you want to collaborate. Thanks for sharing this story and keep writing!