All Comments on 'A Gift from My Wife'

Excellent first entry. I think future stories would benefit from a proofreader, my DMs are open if you want to collaborate. Thanks for sharing this story and keep writing!

Secy hot suprise . Nicely written loved it. Thankyou.

I'll abstain from voting. But his wife having tattoos ruined it for me. I stopped reading right there.

Just from the first several lines of the story, your writing technique seems to be somewhere between adequate and okay. Good luck with your future endeavors.

Grammar and spelling are all over the place, right from the first sentence to the last.

"a bit of a voyeuristic"?

Don't you know thedifference between an adjective and a noun?

Good story line. Needs to be cleaned up, grammatically speaking. Consider having someone proof read it for you. Thank you for sharing.

Nice fantasy

nice! Thank You!

Good first story