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by UnconsciousEmissary

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Onyx1Onyx1about 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this. I'm sure many had teenage crushes that they wish they could explore now, and many had thr type of connection you described.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

damn, fantastic! you should really consider writing more, this is the best i’ve read in a long time. doesn’t feel written by a straight male at all

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Definitely one of the best stories ive read on here hopefully you write more and your wife doesn't happen to stumble upon this lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I've read a lot of stories here over many years, but have never commented on one until now. This is phenomenal—thank you.

Not2PervyNot2Pervyabout 2 years ago

Very nice story. I liked the way you depicted the passion. The ending seemed a little abrupt but still 5 stars for me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow did he see her again

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I’m here to satisfy the mandates of my vivid imagination. About My Writing: All of the stories I share are a combination of fiction and personal experiences. My writing is focused on my own values and desires. I primarily write for myself. There are several important element...