All Comments on 'A Jock in the Machine Ch. 01'

Already read it on Hentai-foundry but still wanted to drop a comment letting you know to keep up the amazing work. 5 stars

Hate this cause Cassie fucking cheated on Tim....

You nailed it as did Cassie. Keep bringing the funny with the hotness. Can’t wait to read more.

I was totally with you until the reveal of the 2ft dick. I can suspend disbelief on 10-12 inches but 22 (I think it was), took me right out of it. Your writing is good though, just wish you made a different choice.

I be honest. I greatly dislike her fucking anyone that isn’t Tim. This story obviously isn’t for me given that, however I hope you have good luck with writing it! Maybe if my tastes change I’ll give it another change.

I wish I was Sam

I started reading this because one of the chapters came up in the the tag search for "romance" when I guess it shoulda been "rape" , to bad Tim is in love with a serial rapist

Looking forward to the contrast between how she treats her lover vs her victims.

A 22 inch dick is very unrealistic but this sex scene was well written. This girl is very punishing but at least she also taught Sam a valuable lesson. Don’t mess with her boyfriend.

THIS DESERVES ALL ITS FUCKING FIVE STARS!! And its only the fisrt chapter?! OMS!!!!!

I was almost drooling, for real

2 stars as promised in my ch 11 post