by lionheartstories
Mixed. Yes, chapter was enjoyable to read and was nicely spiced with erotic thrill. Ok, an obviously unhappy, regular drunk makes an easy blackmail victim - and, concededly, any blackmail plot needs a window of opportunity.
But why does she have to long to be dominated? Too convenient choice. One, rather unlikely (how many teachers are submissive? how man of those bitchy ones?). Two, makes for a too easy plot scenario; forgoes lots of potential for conflict, drama and, in short, overall suspense.
Please feel encouraged to continue writing. Already decently passed the major enjoyable to read hurdle. With experience the fascinating plot and suspense ones might follow.
I like it. I think it has potential. Female teacher, black male studnt formula with a twist. Looking forward to more.
I liked the story but it would be better if you continue it a lot further.
That story has me so wet. I wish I could find a dominant man to make me his bitch and use me like the whore I need to be. The thought of being under someone’s complete control is so enticing. I hope I get to live out this fantasy one day.