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LimeyracerLimeyracer10 months ago

I hate the word "arse" - I'm a Brit so that how I grew up, but Ass" is so much 'nicer'.... Secondly, you definitely need an Editor of Proof-reader to smooth out the structure of the story - short that it is... You have so much to add to the story - their ages, background and a general "deepening" of the characters, otherwise it becomes just a crappy 'fuck story"...

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Just a new little hobby of writing down some ideas, or dreams This is a great way of expressing some dreams, or fantasies, all for a bit of fun. These aren’t trying to be a detailed story or instructional type read but a series of ideas for the reader to “join the dots” and ...