All Comments on 'A Metamorphic Downfall'

The story telling reminds me of a user manual for a technical device: no surprise, no emotion, simple and plain. The end of the story is already known before you start reading.

“The story telling reminds me of a user manual for a technical device: no surprise, no emotion, simple and plain. The end of the story is already known before you start reading.”

Thanks for taking the time to comment, Anonymous, I appreciate it. This story was written a few years ago and it was my first attempt at writing anything even remotely kinky, as that’s not my forte. Nevertheless, I like to think my writing and storytelling has improved since then, especially with regards to kinky stories.

Tge story was somewhat classy , the way everything has been described is so diffrent and definetly suits myntaste

A fitting tribute to the real-life Ariel Anderssen