All Comments on 'A New Career, An Old Profession Ch. 06'

Off to good start . Can't wait to see you learn some lessons . Good and bad . It has been a real treat watching you grow on your journey .

great story please keep it going.

Cheers

SAGE

Have read/enjoyed Mel’s journey. Initial equivocation has given way to praise for the reality you bring to your characters and the sex. Not terribly erotic in conventional sense, yet captivating — grabs and sustains attention. Like what you are doing with Mel as a character and supporting cast, hope you share more of your vivid imagination.

I liked the story, pretty cool, but at least one part is straining my suspension of disbelief. A hi end hooker is pleased to make $36,000 a year? Is this set in 1960? I would have expected four or five times that much. That aside, I am pulling for Mel. I am scared for her, making a record of who she is fucking on specific dates at the end of Ch. 6. She's going to wind up screwing FBI agents in Witness Protection or maybe dead.