All Comments on 'A Nighttime Prowl'

Who spends four years in middle school? Did you mean to say high school, author?

"Heh, nice to meet you too, Sarah," It should be, "Nice to see you." You say, "Nice to meet you," when you are first introduced to someone. You don't say it's nice to meet someone you already know.

"fully ready to end his life with a single push of the trigger." Gun triggers are pulled, not pushed. The error stands out more than it might have if the specific make and model of the gun wasn't cited as if to show off handgun knowledge.

@First Anonymous

Nice catch. I'll have to change that later, thanks for noticing it.

@Second Anonymous

Likewise, nice of you to point these out, I'll fix the text later. Won't lie, it's especially annoying with that push/pull stuff, since those are some of the words I usually take specific care to use corrently, so, to see that I still switched them in this story is more than a bit annoying.

Nice work could use a bit more details but it was a good read. My middle school starts in the 5th here.

@Sw1tch_Queen

Thanks for the kind words. My middle school also started in the 5th actually as well, so that's what I automatically defaulted to.