All Comments on 'A Pleasant Surprise Pt. 02'

Well you have proven that your first post wasn’t a fluke and you have real talent which is always a plus. I am enjoying the depth of the storyline and the continued ease of the conversations. I am again anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Thanks again for your efforts.

J.D.

I love this so far. The characters and their chemistry is awesome. Can’t wait for more!

The reality of what happens between people helps anchor your story. Keep up the great job.

I’m Hooked ! Five Star excellence.

I’m intrigued to see how the storyline, and their relationship and sex evolve. Was it incidental that Ellie offered, and Tom happily accepted, wearing her sexy boy shorts, or will that thread be developed? Will Ellie start testing Tom’s reaction to having his rosebud stimulated, hoping she’ll soon be taking his anal virginity?

Lots to look forward to …….