All Comments on 'A Pleasant Surprise Pt. 09'

This was fine short but fine. Looking forward to the next.

You did great, some chapters just don't come as easy as others. You are great writer in that you got thru it, made it awesome and expect a great next chapter.

Glad to see you continuing the story even if you didn't enjoy writing this chapter.

It was a enjoyable read. Can't wait to read more of this wonderful story and see how it develops.

I didnt notice anything other than it being a bit short. Still love Ellie and Tom and Lucy is a fun friend to have. I cant wait for the next one.

Hope you've still got more coming, or is it cumming? Bad puns aside, thoroughly enjoyed this series. I honestly wouldn't mind a bit more description of Ellie's tits (or whoever) - think only saw one reference about an F-cup? Not so much the realistic nature (don't care), but support the visual/imagination.

Maybe a future chapter includes Lucy with a strap-on?

Hot stuff, but hey, it's been more than a fortnight.... Just saying.... At sny rate I'm really looking forward to more. Incidentally, I have this image of Ellie doing Tom while he's doing Lucy, just in case you can use any more ideas.

So glad you're back!

Next chapter please 😭😭😭

Next chapter? Yep

Hope you're doing ok Risis. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

I really enjoyed this series, and I'm sorry it seems to have ended, hopefully everything is ok with you!

A lot of people are confused about what "fortnight" means. Some think it means a few weeks. Risis thinks it means at least 2 years.

Sorry - it's 14 days. You're LATE, and I don't mean pregnant!

Tom hasn't met Dad. They haven't gone away to their 5-star retreat. Heck, I'm expect Tom's mom to meet Ellie's dad and they find love.

So much more story to tell.

I'm not sure what you disliked about this one, while it wasn't the best of the series it was still worth the entry. While not a huge fan of open relationships it does open a lot of doors from a storyline standpoint. Just make sure its not used all the time. I'd like to see the part of Tom becoming more submissive and more of a bottom explored more personally. Anyway love the series hope you come back to it. Ty for sharing.