All Comments on 'A Quick Trip Away with Wife Pt. 03'

Not sure you'll find a plot in LW. They're all pretty used up.

Loving it so far keep it up, 5 stars

So far, rather refreshing that it's is a sharing/swinging story. However, so far I can see no place where she's not referred to as the general noun of wife and, as narrator, he's not referred to at all, not even by his wife. Proper nouns rather than general nouns tend to help build the characters. Everyone has a name besides them.

all the damn whining 26ThNC does about these stories. That loser has no life if he spends hours each day here reading stories he claims to hate, but you can't find him anywhere else except here reading about wives getting fucked by others. I suppose its his way of remembering his ex-wife, since she ran off to be with a real man who can still get it up without reading stories about other men fucking her.

Happily Everafter!

exciting series to read...they finally stayed together in the same room... hot fun sexy exciting... 5 stars