All Comments on 'A Recruiting Visit to Remember Ch. 02'

Of course after rereading after it’s submitted I realize I should of delayed this for a day. I could’ve added a lot more detail and observations from Tyler that could’ve enhanced the reading experience. But this gives me motivation to edit chapter 3 more diligently.

Hoping Alex comes back still ready to love Tyler. And I still think one of these guys as to develop a but of sexy chest hair as a sexy stimulus for the other. Sexy football players with a bit of hair splashed across their chests -- a very sexy sight!

This is great! Love the development. And high key am a big fan of Adam but that’s the romantic in me. Adam and Alex feel like the nerd vs cheerleader stereotype haha. Very hot story can’t wait for more!

@Dylthompson840 haha thanks. But best to keep in mind we know very little about Adam yet. Nerds can surprise you haha

Good writing… I am just surprised no one asks about Mason so far.