All Comments on 'A Relentless Teen Mistress Ch. 06'

I was only going to read the first chapter and retire to bed. But this story is so hot that i read all 6 Just outstanding. Wish there were more chapters.

Thanks Tom78634! There's no more better praise than knowing someone couldn't stop reading. More chapters are coming soon. The Chloe story might be continued as a sequel series ("Teenage Domme 01", something like that) just so people have a choice of two starting points. But I'm not sure yet.

Absolutely agree with Tom I live stories of dominant schoolgirls, such as those by Silkstockslover. You do yourself a disservice by saying you couldn't compete. This is one of my all time favourite literotica reads. I hope we can all enjoy the continuing story soon.

I’d argue you write better than Silk and She’s an amazing artist.

I like a good lesbian story. I don’t mind a male character, but one is enough.

Chloe goes to all this trouble to submit girls, but there’s really no scenes of her just enjoying her harem. IE when Elyse helped distract Jesse (Chapter 2 page 1), you could have prolonged the story and added character depth by Chloe rewarding Elyse Devers. Didn’t need be long. Just a basic cowgirl while Chloe reviews her plans.

Shame. It looks like you stopped writing in 2020. It’s an amazing series.

Thanks so much for your feedback, 1/31/23 commenter! I haven't actually stopped writing. I significantly revised most of my stories in 2021 and 22, which was quite an effort but I'm much more pleased now. Literotica doesn't change the dates, but you're seeing the revised versions. I'm still writing more chapters (even Mistress in the Making!) and I have a few new stories in progress as well. Some chapters are 90% done and you'll see them soon. (Then I'll revise them in two years too!) Thanks for the writing advice. When I'm on a roll the stories seem to write themselves, but it's tough for me to force it, hack that I am. Sometimes I just go wherever the plots take me, but all advice is certainly welcome (I receive so little). I think you make a good point about giving Chloe just some time to just enjoy her subs. Of course she loves the hunt too. Cheers!

Wow, what a story! Chapter 7 please!