All Comments on 'A Scottish Werewolf's Love Ch. 1'

Good job, this story is very captivating to me. You should continue Book 1, if it isn't finshed.

Ah, maybe using paragraphs would really help this story be more readable... great content I think, but I can't be bothered finishing it because i can't take a breath!

Love the writing so far, but I found it very confusing to have the second series listed first, and the original series listed second (in the chapter sequencing.). it would be much clearer -- and easier to read -- if the Book 2 chapters were moved to the end, behind Book 1.

Ever heard of them? ; ) My poor eyes need a break!

You did a great job.

The only negative, is the painfully incorrect use of Scottish words and grammar.

Read you some guid poems or songs by oor well known Scots bard Rabbie Burns.

It canny help but improve your wonderful wordings.