All Comments on 'A Tomboy and A Prom Queen'

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haltwhogoestherehaltwhogoesthere12 months ago

So many typos. All mechanics, few real emotions.

PappasleazePappasleaze12 months ago

not one of your best. everything just seemed robotic. usually I can feel the raw emtime.otion in your stories. this one left asking what happen. thank Cheri for sharing your thought, looking for the next

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