All Comments on 'A True Thrill'

Teen age love - hormones are in the drivers seat. Hope there are many more chapters to tell where this leads to.

This chapter holds a lot of promise the only thing that’s bothering me is the slut-shaming.

I absolutely hate it. I can almost guarantee that the vast majority of readers would brand both Lynn and Cindy as sluts. At the same time nobody’s going to have any negative opinions about Jareth fucking Cindy or anyone else.... "So? You know I fuck other girls, you like it even.", nobody’s branding him as a slut he’s just some random guy who fucks around. The crux of it is men have sexual freedom and women don’t. So that’s my personal grudge 😉

Really looking forward to reading more of the story.

Tess (UK)