All Comments on 'A Unique Business Trip Ch. 01'

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Qwer12Qwer12about 2 months ago

Not a good story and includes gun violence.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 2 months ago

How did he get a key card? They don’t just hand those out and how did he know the room number?

onlydesicandionlydesicandiabout 2 months ago

Are you going to follow it up with more ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Dumbest story on this site. Wow, what a bad joke of a writer. Didn't hold my interest, and it appears the writer doesn't even know how pathetic attempt they put into whatever this was.........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

First, it's a bad look to be eating dinner in a room, instead of a restaurant, but I can't imagine the wife and boss being so passive, while he's waiving A gun around. How in the hell does he get a key? This just flows too well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

as if 'gun violence' is some super scary thing, compared to other forms of violence. a baseball would have been fine, but not a gun? Grow the fuck up. The only thing about Qwer12's comment that made sense was the 'not a good story' part, which is demonstrably correct.

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