All Comments on 'A Unique Business Trip Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

as if 'gun violence' is some super scary thing, compared to other forms of violence. a baseball would have been fine, but not a gun? Grow the fuck up. The only thing about Qwer12's comment that made sense was the 'not a good story' part, which is demonstrably correct.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

First, it's a bad look to be eating dinner in a room, instead of a restaurant, but I can't imagine the wife and boss being so passive, while he's waiving A gun around. How in the hell does he get a key? This just flows too well.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Dumbest story on this site. Wow, what a bad joke of a writer. Didn't hold my interest, and it appears the writer doesn't even know how pathetic attempt they put into whatever this was.........

onlydesicandionlydesicandi2 months ago

Are you going to follow it up with more ?

WhackdoodleWhackdoodle2 months ago

How did he get a key card? They don’t just hand those out and how did he know the room number?

Qwer12Qwer122 months ago

Not a good story and includes gun violence.

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