by TRaff
This is a winner! The topic is not new, but the writing and back-and-forth are excellent. A battle in his mind for control, but at least at this point, it is a losing battle. Get that? At this point? =) There are several similar stories currently in progress, but this is far and away the best of them. Any hope for longer chapters?
Thanks :)
I can probably make chapters longer, it seems to be consistent feedback.