All Comments on 'A Weekend Away Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It’s much better than the first chapter but still has that awkward jumble of perspective as well as continuity errors, you didn’t mention removing the Ben Wa balls at any point so inserting anything else just wouldn’t happen.

Otherwise a nice sexy continuation.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

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