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- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 days agoI won’t write out the ringing insults filling my head right now. Really solid writing at times, but you absolutely ruined your story. Awful.
Anonymous7 days agoHe comes across as not knowing what he truly wants. You wrote that he doesn’t have the sadistic gene but pleasing his wife in a sexual playful bdsm way is not sadistic. A true sadist doesn’t care about the partner.n
goodwab9 days agoThis story was well-written, and up to a point, its psychological detail was convincing. But in the last bit, when Ian said he wanted his unfaithful wife to move back, I felt things slip. He has just experienced several instances of her manipulativeness and deceit around Jodi, and he rightly protests, but then he lets it go as if her rationalizations, compartmentalization and deceit no longer mattered. I didn't see how he git from point A to point B, and I still don't. And he suddenly was on speaking terms with Jodi, whose role as Reed's wing woman was very unsavory. I had no conviction that the wife's disavowals of Reed were genuine. For a long story like this to succeed, the character's emotional progression has to teased out very carefully. That wasn't quite accomplished in this story, even though it was well-written and absorbing. 4****
Anonymous13 days agoStory wasn’t bad but every time this reed character was included it went to hell in the end it made no sense just made up bullshit to justify a means so in the end the story sucked
