All Comments on 'A Wish'

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AngelRiderAngelRiderover 1 year ago

What's hot about this? The woman wasn't enjoying it. Is this hot for men who get off on violently abusing women? Why was this even allowed? What exactly did she "enjoy in the end" (Laurels benchmark) this site is a joke.

WittonWittonover 1 year ago

AngelRider's comment was well made.

There is a small set of men who consider the impregnation of women to be the be-all and end-all of pornography - how it happened is not so important as that it did, and if it was unwilling well so much the better.

i think the word "pervert" applies

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Way, WAY too many commas. Every paragraph is a run-on sentence. I couldn't even follow the story because it was so distracting. See how I'm putting periods at the end of my statements? That's how you break them up. Try it, it's fun!

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I write for my pleasure, it's not perfect and I don't pretend to be a great writer. My writing is fantasy, it makes me horny and I hope it does the same for my readers.