All Comments on 'A Workout to Remember'

Good first story!

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When the synopsis says "me and my wife" rather than "my wife and I," you know that the story is not worth reading.

Very nice to see that you didn't join horde of mentally ill writers who start with cuck story.

Well Done!... Keep up a good work, 5

A decent story that suffers from being posted in the wrong category.

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Sorry, but the category of a story sets expectations. People decide whether to try a story based on the expectations set by several things, including title, description, category, and tags. It is in the writer's best interests to make sure that these things match the story that they wrote. In this case, you failed that.

Hope you wiped the equipment when you finished.

I don't think there was a single paragraph that did not have an error.