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"I think we'll stay awake for now, you go get your rest. We will take care of you during the night," Sarah said, holding both girls close.
They watched Cody walk to the bedroom and close the door. "So when do we want to start hunting for Pascal?" Sarah asked the twins.
"I'll go ask some of my friends if they can help," Eveline said, standing up and rubbing her taut stomach.
"I'll go ask Ashley if there's a way to catch Pascal or at least keep her from bugging Cody in while he sleeps," Carly offered.
"Sounds good," Sarah said, pulling her phone out and looking through some things, "I'll go to bed shortly, I just want to look some things up."
The girls each pulled out their phones and started to text, Carly walked over to the door leading to the roof and opened it looking for the guards who stayed up there.
- COMMENTS
Cortavar12 months agoHi TBCody and everyone!
I just binged your whole story and it's pretty great!
It may be a bit fast-paced, like the events going could have unfolded over a few months instead of something like a week, but on the other hand that keeps things interesting and dynamic.
As with any long-running series, the sex isn't the best part, the plot is. I liked your sex scenes a lot, you managed to make reptiles and snakes sexy to me, who's naturally indeferent to them.
Your characters are well fleshed-out, and there is a lot of plots to unfold:
- Who is Sarah, and what are her hidden motives?
- What's going on with the dream Royals?
- Will the Hunters find out about Cody being the dragon king?
- Will Cody be able to master his powers before they are needed?
- Why does Cody blur grandma's visions?
Those are the few main plots I could spot from the top of my head, but I'm sure there are a lot more (will scorpion girl get draconized into a manticore? what kind of draconic form does a slug even make? if Cody fucked his adoptive daughter, would she gain human or draconic characteristics? Will the house be big enough for Cody and all of his harem? Are we going to get a training montage of Cody learning to properly fly/fight/use magic/train his breaths? etc...)
You have a rich universe, a fascinating tale to tell, and I'll be sure to drop by when you publish the next chapter.
Best wishes,
Cortavar
