All Comments on '"Accidentally" Blown by Mom Pt. 02'

Quite possibly the worst story I’ve ever seen on this site. The spelling and punctuation was atrocious and there was no continuity to the alleged storyline at all.

Please,please learn the English language before you post again.

Proofreading your story to eliminate typos and spelling mistakes would make your story easier to read and more enjoyable.

Awful

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Horrible story.. Mom, sisters and son would’ve been so much better. The father ruins the whole thing in both stories. It’s like some sick second grader wrote it. I wish it were possible to give a negative number. You earned it.

Please don't let the other commenters discourage you. Your story has a good premise, but I will say the spelling errors and obvious typos were sadly causing a lack of immersion. There are editors on here that are very willing to proofread your work. Keep at it, and you will get better.

If you would like help proof reading - reach out, would be happy to help

Part 1 was good part 2 the spelling issues make for a distracted focus.

Fix the spelling this sucked

I sent the wrong copy in lmao… y’all are assholes haha but thanks for the kindness to those who encouraged me.

I wanna be adopted

I thought this was fucking amazing

Will there be anymore "accidents"!? That could lead to a whole new generation of "accidents!" LOL!!

when is the next chapter please

So fucking hot!

bonner material