All Comments on 'Acrobatics 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Tense!

Mary is fun. This is tense.

kydreamrkydreamrover 18 years ago
Quite a hot story, nice buildup

Interesting situation which could lead either to big time marriage trouble, or to a more open marriage. Nicely developed plot, though the characters still need some more personality depth which can be added in ensueing chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

learn to spell peek

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