All Comments on 'Acrobatics 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

learn to spell peek

kydreamrkydreamrover 18 years ago
Quite a hot story, nice buildup

Interesting situation which could lead either to big time marriage trouble, or to a more open marriage. Nicely developed plot, though the characters still need some more personality depth which can be added in ensueing chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Tense!

Mary is fun. This is tense.

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