All Comments on 'Adventures with New Friends'

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Sailor59Sailor59about 1 month ago

Wow that moved fast. Just barely first posed the idea of playing, before she has time to contemplate it, the hubby walks in the door and has her straight down on the couch going to town. Seems like there should be a more build up or discussion at that point. This is the point of tension where the story is. Then the interaction between the two women is a tension dynamic. The sex is incidental to the story.

Try again, it didn't do much for me.

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