All Comments on 'Aella Ch. 02'

It is a bit shallow and certainly not Non-con in the usual sense. The writing is ok, but we need some drama and her aching for an orgasm does not really qualify. Bring on some humiliation at work among her friends. She needs a new hairstyle. The piercings and tats are on the horizon, so make her hate them. If she is going to use her tongue more and more, then a tongue piercing. That would make it Non-con and bring some intensity to the story. Please continue.