All Comments on 'After the Bet'

Really enjoyable fantasy that played into a number of fetishes for me. Looking forward to more. Please consider an editor to pick up the few errors that aren’t spelling.

Like the first story I’m giving it 5 stars, but only for the entertainment value and interested sex scenes and events. Outside of that, I’m getting frustrated with the story. Why is Ellie doing this, why won’t the writer tell us what’s going on? Why has this moved so far away from “a workday naked”? Why hasn’t he asked Ellie why she’s doing this to him? The sexuality and ideas the writer has are fun and erotic, but the story is now aimlessly wandering without a point. I’m losing interest as the context of the story is lost, but I’ve come this far and I’ll read the last story, hoping it answers some questions.