All Comments on 'Alena's Game Ch. 12'

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

I really can't wait for the next chapter every time. It is hard to believe there are actual people That would literally ask to be a slave to their wife. Please keep writing on this great story..

Once and for all not vanilla

How utterly miserable.

I can't read this anymore. The husband is an idiot and the wife is a terrorist. This could be a loving thing that gives him the structure he wants and her a say in things. Instead, she finds new ways to damage him and he apparently wants to be a pussy.

I'm very shocked and surprised that Quinn chose complete slavery over just in the bed room sub action!! after listening to all of his thoughts about everything his wife has been doing to him, over the last couple weeks. So why didn't he pick the less of the two choices. we know he did't want to go back to vanilla or the why it was. BUT COMPLETE SLAVERY! AND HOW CRAZY HIS WIFE GETS WHEN SHE IN MISTRESS/DOM MODE there is just NO LOVE then. Please keep writing on this great story..

Keep writing, really good storyline. I was sad when Quinn picked slavery at dinner with his wife, when she instantly turned mean or hateful….

Outstanding!!! This is a great story but now Alena HAS to turn the screws on his slavery inside and outside the bedroom!!!

I still enjoy the storytelling but to give your entire existence to another? One who professes to love but humiliated and intentionally abuse him. I keep wondering how this would impact his work and other relationships. I wonder if he’ll be truly happy, especially as she continues to explore her sexuality outside of the “marriage”. That must come into play, if she hasn’t already cheated.

I’m just being picky. Good read.

First time I’ve ever bothered to leave a comment. I have really enjoyed this series. Haven’t been able to put it down. Their dynamic and fallibility is so interesting. Im not sure how you’re going to tackle her death or if you plan to try. I really look forward to this one continuing.

I'm thinking I might switch it up next week and only publish one chapter and then another story I had kicking around: Taking Instruction, which shows the flip side of what's going on. Still aiming to be finished before New Year.

I've been reading quietly without commenting thus far, but time to share some thoughts.

1) This writer has talent. This story is not just entertaining, it's captivating. Leaves the reader hungry for more.

2) Surprised Quinn picked Option #3. Option #2 would have seemed like a dream scenario and the obvious pick if I were in his shoes. Can scarcely imagine a woman boldly offering those three choices up to me.

3) I disagree with the commenters who think Alena is an irredeemable, narcissistic monster. She admits she went too far at the Lost and Found. She apologizes to him for it. The author, I think, does a fine job characterizing Alena as someone who is still finding her footing, struggling in her own way to balance her treatment of her husband (who has time and time again willingly chosen to embark on this path that they've set for themselves) with her desire to satiate her own sexual appetite. That's not the characterization of a monster. That's a character trying to find herself.

4) That being said, I do fear that since Quinn chose option #3, she might become a character that is increasingly difficult to stomach. Hope not, but we'll see.

5) It does appear that Alena has passed away somehow (due to "illness" I think it was mentioned). Heartbreaking if that turns out to be true. If there's a twist, and she's not actually dead, that would be interesting. Otherwise, I'm rooting for Quinn and Casssie. Some stories do well ending on a somber note. This is not shaping up to be one of those stories. There needs some light at the end.

6) Kudos to the author. Remarkable work is being done here. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

too bad to see this story just turned into a slave and mistress/dom story, i guess no move "love", what little there was all gone now. just by what she said after Quinn's choice, "I promise I'll still check in with you from time to time, Quinn". sad to say it was a good thing that Alena died in the accident, but the damage was already done to Quinn..

Fantástica!

Esperando el siguiente capítulo!!

I've been reading quietly without commenting thus far, but time to share some thoughts.

1) This story is not just entertaining, it's captivating. Leaves the reader hungry for more.

2) Surprised Quinn picked Option #3. Option #2 would have seemed like a dream scenario and the obvious pick if I were in his shoes. Can scarcely imagine a woman boldly offering those three choices up to me.

3) I disagree with the commenters who think Alena is an irredeemable, narcissistic monster. She admits she went too far at the Lost and Found. She apologizes to him for it. The author, I think, does a fine job characterizing Alena as someone who is still finding her footing, struggling in her own way to balance her treatment of her husband (who has time and time again willingly chosen to embark on this path that they've set for themselves) with her desire to satiate her own sexual appetite. That's not the characterization of a monster. That's a character trying to find herself.

4) That being said, I do fear that since Quinn chose option #3, she might become a character that is increasingly difficult to stomach. Hope not, but we'll see.

5) It does appear that Alena has passed away somehow (due to "illness" I think it was mentioned). Heartbreaking if that turns out to be true. If there's a twist, and she's not actually dead, that would be interesting. Otherwise, I'm rooting for Quinn and Casssie. Some stories do well ending on a somber note. This is not shaping up to be one of those stories. There needs some light at the end.

6) Remarkable work is being done here. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Like many I'm struggling with Q choosing option 3 but not for the reasons given. It seems very abrupt on his part to pick 24/7 after such a short time. It seems they've been playing only a few months at most. It seems equally strange Alena would offer something that extreme in that same period. The other discrepancy is Qs inner monologue and statements to Alena. He complains a lot. He is stuck on her treatment of him even after they talk about it and he agrees to move forward. In this chapter alone he says he wants to spend some normal time with his wife "more than you can imagine" and just before the offer is made. I would have liked to see Q embrace their new relationship and himself before getting this deep.

To the author: you story is captivating. I would not comment if I didn't care.

To those criticizing the wife and this type of relationship please leave. The premise is described in advance. You don't need to stick around for 12 chapters.

I am enjoying this very very much. I don't usually comment on stories, but @EnsignRo is correct: It is captivating. I also agree with his comment #3. I am also enjoying the exploration of Quinn's submission. You are a great writer. Please take this story to a conclusion.

Still Great story. Going by the author’s comment this will end by the end of the year, to bad it could have gone on forever. I’m just hope we get back to chapter 1, to see how Alena got so sadistic and controlling dom to do what did to him. Please keep write on this story we all do love it so far, some of us we’re sad that he chose to be a complete slave, 24/7 to her and NOT just in the bedroom..

I came late to this story, and I very much enjoy the characterizations, the structure, and the flow of the story. This is creative, and communicates well.

That said, the subject matter is repugnant to me, and I feel people who subject themselves to this, on both sides of the sub/dom equation, are nothing I care to associate with.

For those of you who read what I just wrote, and say “Hypocrite! Don’t read it then!” Please keep in mind this story has a good rating at this time, I’m giving it four stars for how well written it is, and I’m allowed my own opinion. My stating I don’t care for the subject matter should be taken as I will check back with the author, to see if there’s something more palatable later. Oneagainst has ability.

If you can’t accept that, then you’re the problem.

The single premise that a woman who is a cruel, sadistic, misandrist, torturer can claim to “love” the person she inflicts physical and psychological pain and trauma on, is utterly ridiculous.

She enjoys causing pain, suffering and humiliation on her husband who she pretends to care for is, frankly, not only unbelievable but laughable, if it were not so disturbing.

Constant abuse and cruelty, not only causes damage to the subject but also diminishes the perpetrator.

I think it confirms what most of us already knew, that women are by far the more cruel and callous sex.

At this point five stars feels lacking. Lovely chapter that once again provides us with a wonderful exchange. This pivotal dinner conversation is where the wheels leave the runway, or so it feels. As intense as the journey has been so far, much like Alena, the author has moved things incrementally with some degree of restraint. If there are clumsy scenarios or exchanges, I certainly don't see them.

This is such a great chapter in the series, you catch the dynamic so well. Like most I’m not sure about the “choice” but for the story it’s clearly excellent. The concept of role playing as wife and husband (equal) when they’re nothing of the sort and her decision to demonstrate it so subtlety but so absolutely was inspired.

Well written, but with her admittance of fault, not realizing her responsibilities, no apologies until now, don't think I would have made it past the caning.

Aftercare is so darn important to understand if you've done damage submissive.

She was never properly trained, not even sure if I can keep reading.

@R07W55 this often comes up around this part of the story, and is an excellent point, so I'll address it. The issue here is that (though she seeks to shield her husband from this) she's still getting to grips with the dynamic herself. They are making up the rules as they go as opposed to referencing a textbook, and there are failures.