Alena's Game Ch. 15

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I heard wet slopping noises and stole a look up from my bowl to see Alena working her pussy vigorously with one hand while diddling her clit with the other. She pressed her knees together involuntarily, seized by a wave of bliss and her fingers began to dart inside herself faster and faster.

"Keep eating," she hissed through clenched teeth, "Eat it all."

Her tone countenanced no refusal. I was fully aware of the cost of non-compliance, of robbing Alena of the pleasure of seeing her husband humiliated to the point of eating out of a bowl on the ground, bound in his crate. I was nothing more than masturbation fodder to push her to the brink of ecstasy. I should have been furious, slurping the remains of her dinner while listening to my wife bring herself to the almighty climax that she was denying me. I finished the contents of the bowl and looked up.

Alena was on her knees in front of the cage door now, her legs spread wide, her pussy almost close enough to taste. She was showing me what I was missing out on. Bent over, I could only stare in frustrated agony as I endured the torture of my compressed manhood straining through the bars of its prison. I watched, close up, as Alena's thighs began to quiver with the onslaught of her climax. All at once, her hips bucked, thrusting her pussy against my cage, rubbing herself against the metal bars to prolong her phenomenal orgasm. I closed my eyes, my nostrils filled with the scent of my wife's ejaculation. I had done this, I realised. I had given Alena this.

She pulled away, sitting down on her bottom, legs splayed, a single finger still teasing her entrance as she quivered in the aftershocks. Alena's eyes locked on mine.

"Finish, your meal. I want to see you lick the bowl clean."

I looked up at her, begging with my eyes, but I was met with a wall of indifference. Alena needed to watch me do it. If I was ever going to earn my release, I would have to give her what she asked for. One last time, I bent my face down to the bowl and began to lick and suck until it was spotless.

I felt a tug at my wrists and then my hands slid free. Alena had unlocked me from the handcuffs.

"You're such a well-trained boy. You can stay in your crate if you want or go to your room."

I watched in stunned silence as Alena got up and walked out of the room, her naked body swaying in a way that made my guts clench, her high heels clicking on the wooden floor. After everything I had endued for her, I had been expecting a reward, or at least to be uncaged and allowed to slake my own needs. Instead, I was left, kneeling, still bound in painful chastity, naked, my cheeks covered in my wife's meal, and so endlessly, maddeningly horny.

As I knelt there, trying to piece it all together, the only thing I realised was that Alena had succeeded in her mission. She had turned her husband into a helpless toy who would do anything she asked.

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[Next chapter: Alena packs to go away to a conference for a week. Quinn discovers she's bought some sexy new lingerie to take with her.

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oneagainstoneagainstabout 1 year agoAuthor

Just happy with the feedback :-) rather than money. There's also a standalone sequel waiting its turn in the queue, and Quinn continues in later stories.

freemanhollygardenfreemanhollygardenabout 1 year ago

wow. just wow. you deserve fame and fortune and everything that goes with it. I want to give you money so you continue to write. thank you for this story. it gives me great pleasure. i haven't read anything so compelling in ages.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

To the commenters who say "relax, it's fiction", I say OK fine, but those of us reacting with disgust and revulsion are entitled to feel that way. And the excuse that its just fiction, doesnt mean everything is ok to wtite, Would Holocaust erotica be ok? How about stuff with minors? Still ok? What about snuff erotica? "Its just fiction" isnt a magic wand absolving the author of any critcism. Also, femdom and bdsm are general terms. Thier are degrees from gentle loving femdom to harder stuff, to this. UGH Ive had enough.

MrArcherMrArcherover 1 year ago

This was a great story. I suggest you ignore the negative comments about this being unrealistic. Those people probably watch Star Wars and complain that spaceships can't maneuver like they show in the movie. This is fiction, and great fiction for some of us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You could have added a paragraph where he gives her the padlock and indicates that he wants to stay in the crate, before she left him there locked up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sometimes when I read an erotic short story, my mouth dries and I get an odd feeling. It happens when I read many of Leviticus’ stories. I know why: the skill of the author in leading my mental vision of the story, like peeling back the layers of baklava, which is how a complex story is told. Brilliantly done. Thank you, so so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love these commentators who are like …. Ooooooh I’m gonna call the BDSM Police on you!!!!

I guess the one who said “this isn’t a a marriage” is right though. It’s fiction. Learn to read.

This story is hot and dark and sad. I’m hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good chapter. The confinement element is hot. On releasing him from the cage, the line where she tells him he can either stay in there or go to his room was especially hot, implying that he is now confined to one or the other when not being used.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow, these comments are wild. I'm sure you're used to them as an author of Literotica, but still.

This is a FANTASY. The appeal is reading about scenarios that should never play out in real life. If I wanted a safe BDSM story, this is not where I'd be. It's the equivalent of ordering cake and crying that it's not ice cream. People really just can't stand it when authors aren't personally jerking them off, and it's fine to not like it - but behaving like a tantruming toddler is beyond inappropriate.

We who are in the NonConsensual/Reluctance category on purpose appreciate your work! This is a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think that's the point though. She isn't an experienced Dom, they're both learning as they explore. Of course she's going to make mistakes.

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