All Comments on 'All Tied Up'

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ArkingArking7 months ago

Interesting. Forced sexual favours can be quite erotic. It seems she got what she wanted after all.

SubmissiveCelesteSubmissiveCeleste7 months ago

As always I enjoyed it. I love your work but you know that. You always make me feel like I am in the room with you. Miss you.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

The storyline is good, but the pronouns are jarring. Watch who said what, for instance Emma had to have asked John about the view, because John responded.

lilacandhoneysucklelilacandhoneysuckle7 months ago

This feels like it was written by an AI

Becaa57Becaa577 months ago

This was very good, loved how quickly she turned around to be his willing slut

BigspurtBigspurt7 months ago

I think I’ll tie my wife.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I really liked the cuffs and ballgag aspects of this story. Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

The writing is terrible. Horrible grammar.

RealisticsixRealisticsix7 months ago

Looking forward to the next installment

robertjohnrobertjohn6 months ago

Good story. Not bothered about grammar mistakes.

Jimmy63Jimmy6310 days ago

I loved this story. So glad I found you on Lit!

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