All Under Control Ch. 03

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"Want me to make it easier?"

"Is this a trick?"

"No. It's a trade-off."

"Fine. Tell me."

I kissed her slowly, feeling her desperate body responding to me. I took my time, seemingly oblivious to her arousal.

"I'm going to buy something for you. A collar."

"Seriously?"

"Yep. When you wear the collar, I'll set it up in your mind that the feeling you're feeling now will become less, become more manageable. Okay?"

"There's a catch, right?"

I kissed her again and grinned. "Oh yes, there's a catch. When you take the collar off, all the feelings will come back at once. If you've been wearing the collar for ten hours, you get the feeling of ten hours of edging, all at once."

"No way. You can stick your offer."

"Please yourself. A few days from now you'll be begging me for it."

"How do you know?"

"Believe me, I know."

I intended to push Mina. There was a part of me that needed to find out just how far she'd go. Despite myself, I was beginning to warm to my role as her torturer.

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cat833942cat833942about 1 year ago

Not sure her bringing up being a puppet is actually asking for this, but she does keep on pushing for more and more, and her subconscious is clearly fully on board with all of this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm done with this. This mean shit pisses me off! Have you ever heard of too far? It was fun in the first few chapters, but now it's it's dumb for him and her and from the descriptions of the coming chapters it get worse. That's torture, not sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I love your writing style, it’s all very realistic and sexy af. I’m a big fan. That said this story is still terrifying to me.

The end of this chapter was gut wrenching, clichés exist for a good reason and in this case the applicable one is “Power corrupts…” The nightmare scenario of him doing exactly what she asked him not to turning her into a fucktoy puppet. Playing with the mind is a very dangerous thing there’s a strong possibility that he might never get her back. The comment about erasing her memories was for me like a punch to the gut, I’ve always had a bad memory and my husband has jokingly told me a story about something I’ve said or done that isn’t true and I’ve believed it.

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A brilliant story. Hope that the next part is coming soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I was expecting the two of them going farther than in the open building, and at the party, for me a little more would of been nice

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