All Comments on 'Allison's New Life Ch. 17'
by Goldeniangel
- 9 Comments
fakers51about 19 years agoAny and all of the Allison saga I love to read. They are getting shorter, but to have earlier version, you can only think they will get more erotic.
lilsubalexabout 19 years ago*giggling* love it .. and though I didn't notice it until the other poster mentioned it - the chapters have been a bit shorter. Hey, editors... post two at a time!!!
Yup... she's in trouble ... but me thinks Diana is too. Todd's gonna punish Allison - but I'd *think* more for the second session than the first -- the first, well... she was sort of coerced, but the after Chad's departure, that was all willful. Though admittedly she could have at least argued the point earlier, so yup punishment due!
More more moree.... (did ya here that rebel yell? *G* )
roadbirdabout 19 years agohave you ever thought of writing romance novels ... is getting better though ... just keep trying ....one day youll get it right
LuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 19 years agohugs and kisses you've done it again... oh whispers ch 3 is up! yeah!!
good job...
kisses,
T
wifefuckedabout 19 years agoI can't wait for each new chapter! They turn me on so much! You have a wonderful imagination and feel for the pen (keyboard) that few have matched! Your effort has not gone unnotoiced or unappreciated here!
Thank you SO much!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoTruly enjoyable...
Allison is due for a snatch wack...Diana will challenge Todd and poor Chad will receive Todd at the back door...I truly love the way your mind revolves.
My only disappointment so far is that I seem to be so many months behind all of the rest of your readers (hince the comment title). Sorry, I only discovered you last week. I am looking forward to the rest of the series...so on with the game.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI like your story but your timeline is kind of iffy. Chad has been reduced to a fuck buddy, guys have been coming over and he has become submissive, being denied pussy for 2 weeks and all of this in the period of two weeks waiting for Todd to return? It doesn't add up, it's small but it bothers the attentive reader I guess.
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