All Comments on 'Alpha Ch. 11'

On the one hand happy you are continuing the story but not sure I like the direction you are going. Yes Ealasaid deserves to mourn, rage, and find happiness but giving in to the darkness does not seem the most constructive way to go. Also the reason she can not be happy is she is fighting against truth, her true mate, true nature, and true self. If she finds a way to meld this along with her new additional powers all would be well and she can stop crying, killing, and whoring herself out.

So good! I began forcing myself to slow down reading this chapter and only reading so much a day so I could stretch it out as long as possible. Thank you for writing this! Not to push, but do you perchance know when you will have another chapter to release?

I am so invested in this story I do hope you write more to this. I am so looking forward to reading the following battle between Baal, Drago and Eala. I cannot wait to see what the next chapter holds, please dont keep us waiting too long!

Please continue this story, I CANT get enough.

Please continue this story?!?! Im captivated

I need Drago to get his Mate back!! Its supposed to be him and Eala!!

Amazing story! I kind of ship Eala and Baal though. Will you be continuing this story or is this the end?

Please finish the story!

The story is finished. Don't ruin Drago for me any more than you already have. He's already a selfish piece of shit for leaving her there and then being a condescending asshole talking about come back to me...... Just let her be I'm ready for her to have some peace

She is pretty much all over the place eh? Hope things aren’t more complicated than they need to be