All Comments on 'Alpha Epsilon Pi'

Hot!

So many writing errors.

Thank you for the feedback XOXO Cheri

The feedback/emails from this story saying I let down my lesbian readers should understand my writing is not always a bed of roses it can take twist and turns down dark paths much like life the contrast of such a tender moment of a shy girl(me) on a first date thrown into a wild ass to mouth threesome mimics life's ironies I write from my own experiences with a literary embellishment and life is not always easy or pretty thank keep the feedback coming XOXO Cheri

I didn't believe it, but my girlfriend told me she had an orgasm when I fucked her ass. If she gets hot enough, she can come when I tongue her ass. Amazing!

So-so story with about 50 spelling and grammatical errors. Need to do a much better job.

The ending literally makes this seem like you’re writing a report over anal.

If you are reading erotic stories to correct errors in spelling and grammar I feel sorry for you

What. The fuck is going on with the. Punctuation in this. Story. I understand that. You think it's sad to correct spelling and grammar in. An. Erotic story but. Without proper punctuation it's, impossible... to. Read a story in with the proper, flow which really. Undermines the. Eroticism of the ex perience.