Amanda and Jeff Ch. 14

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Jeff was conflicted on what to do. He had to leave the gym as it would be closing soon. He didn't want to go home. He finished getting dressed. He decided to take himself out for his birthday. They could all stew a bit longer as he put his phone in airplane mode. He packed up his belongings and headed out.

It was about ten o'clock when he got home. Amanda was up waiting for him; she was a nervous wreck.

"Where have you been? You didn't reply to my texts or calls? You had me worried." Amanda complained.

"I decided to celebrate my birthday at the gym; afterward, I took myself out for dinner. You should have been worried when you and your friends were disrespecting me on my birthday, in my own home," he snapped back.

"I didn't plan it to go down that way; things just started and then got out of control; I thought it was too late to stop," she explained.

"You should have listened to me when I said I didn't want a party," he yelled.

"Your friends wanted to celebrate with you," she answered.

"They aren't my friends. Friends would never treat a friend that way. Hell, a loving spouse wouldn't treat their spouse that way," Jeff answered. "I want to make it clear to you; I am not in this as a lifestyle. These people are my coworkers, my on-film collaborators; they are not my friends. If you fail to recognize the difference between real life and fantasy, then we are finished as a couple."

"Are you threatening me with divorce?" Amanda whispered as she started breaking out in tears.

"Promising, not threatening. I think I've put up with enough shit already. I don't think a divorce would be any more humiliating than what I've gone through already," Jeff said quietly.

"You couldn't live without me," Amanda sobbed.

"It's the other way around. I've already been living without you. You've taken advantage of my doing everything for you while you toss me the crumbs. Try and get along without me," Jeff said as he headed to the guest bedroom. He locked the privacy lock before he undressed for bed.

Amanda sat on the sofa, crying. She couldn't fault Jeff for feeling the way he did. She didn't do too much for him. He tried to take them away for Valentine's, and she screwed that up. She insisted on a birthday party that he didn't want and that went off the rails and made things worse. She didn't know how to bring things to a balance. Jeff was right; he could live without her. She was afraid that she wouldn't be able to live without him; he practically took care of everything in their lives. She went off to bed; she wasn't surprised that Jeff camped out in the guest room.

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larryjohnrebornlarryjohnrebornabout 3 years ago
Please end this fast

It’s just way too repetitive abd we start to become actually turned off by the stuff Amanda does despite our liking of the femdom and cuckold genres. Just end it because it’s seriously getting really bad..

limpcucklimpcuckabout 3 years ago

Amanda fucks up and forgets what she was ment to do with jeff, jeff forgives her. Amanda fucks up and forgets what she was ment to do with jeff,and forgets what she was ment to do with jeff, jeff forgives her, Amanda fucks up jeff forgives her. Can her memory truly be that bad as the way you've written it its a wonder she can remember to put her clothes on in the morning. The birthday party was a joke, she blew the one thing they agreed on never to do a matter of days later as she thought he'd enjoy it.

Take more time and look at the plot as its repetitive and in a lot of places now becoming a joke

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Time to bring this to an end! What could be interesting plot lines seem to be introduced and then left hanging in favour of the same old scenario! Hoping for a surprising end!

mCyclademCycladeabout 3 years ago

Since he has to do porn scenes don't think they did that. I think they gave him drugs to keep him docile and numb. Don't really remember amidst all the other stuff.

I feel the writing style is good. The story pulls a bit too long. No one can forgive so much crap being heaped at them. Amanda's promises mean crap and it's obvious she's going to only spiral further. Hope Jeff finally divorces her ass like he should have done some 10 parts back when she defiled her wedding dress and his dead mother's ring. No self respecting man would let that happen and let her get away with it.

Her friend Yvette is a mystery, not sure if she wants them to be together or just doesn't care. I'm looking forward to him divorcing her and a equal number of chapters showing Amanda's suffering and spiral to rock bottom.

trianetrianeabout 3 years ago

Starting to get repetitive. Jeff's been chemically castrated and put on an aggressive hormone therapy, weeks have passed and the effects of that would be showing. Also, Amanda is either a sociopath or has brain damage, her "forgetfulness" is chronic and deleterious. Wherever you're trying to go, how about progressing the plot, the last few chapters are all but indistinguishable from each other.

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