All Comments on 'Amateur Night'

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Would a chapter 2 be of interest?

I've never been fucked like a horny Black man can! Gals, if you've never had a Big hard erect Black clock fucking you, you've not been properly fucked!

I know you'll have to go back to your hubby, but it will never be the same! You'll have to take a lot more climaxes too!

Orpheum69

Loved it, ending was too quick for me. Take some time and finish it with a bang , then have him do something romantic before she leaves. She will be double hooked.

I agree, with the other comment. The ending needs to be longer with a more detailed climax. Maybe something like her losing her self and her train of thought. She's hears herself say, " Again! I need more and I want to feel you come inside me this time."

Thanks for leaving comments, it's encouraging. I agree it ends a little too soon, but sometime I don't want a story to get too long either. I am working on a Chapter 2, and will heed the advice.

Thanks to those who vote as well. I strive to hit a 4.5 rating which will classify the work as HOT. I realize there are haters out there on this subject and give a low score.