All Comments on 'Among Us - Zenith'

Loved it. Thanks for a great read. Your plot and character development were amazing. I couldn’t put it down and spent a long five hours reading it to the possibly prophetic conclusion. So glad you posted it and can’t wait to read your other submissions. Thanks again for your awesome way with words, it’s greatly appreciated.

Thank you for a fantastic story. While the plot and characters were outstanding, the sex scenes were imo

(IMHO) were a bit lack luster. I read your forward on each chapter and being stop on, so I can't fault you for intent or outcome. Bottom line, (pun intended 😉) its your story. But as a reader read read like a good cake with no icing. Very good, but nothing to boast about to your friends or family about. I will add your profile to my favorites list to wait and watch to see what you come up t9 next.