All Comments on 'An Accidental Love God Ch. 03'

I really like how this guy thinks and operates. Keep up the series.

I do like how you are keeping the hero kind of dazed and confused through all of this. His "gentle extortion" of the 10% was kind of out of character, for such a straight arrow, but understandable. I also like how you are keeping these stories to a single page. Hard to do with so much potential for fun and games. Can't wait for the next one. Got to find out how the wife will deal with hubby's adventures.

This chapter had a great setup and a poor execution. Actions that should be savoured are over in two lines. Why?

I loved the throw-away line at the end about TSA.

Good stuff.

Lovely fantasy.

4/5