by Oldbroad76
Hi. There, beautiful story, the plot, the story and narrative harmony and all.
Plus the little of "suspens" at the end
...hence the question: are you writing Chapter 5? Really looking forward to it!
The story might feel slightly a bit too serious at times, if one comes here expecting to read just porn. But it just means that you managed to describe the character's feelings and motivations really well. There might've been less "meat" this time, but the backstory is written really well, and so is the whole emotional side of the story. Well done!