All Comments on 'An Attorney's House Rules Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love clicking a *1 for shit like this.

tomasnytomasnyover 2 years ago

Very good story! Will Debra open up her relationship with Jamal in Part 5?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

When is Part 5 coming out?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hi. There, beautiful story, the plot, the story and narrative harmony and all.

Plus the little of "suspens" at the end

...hence the question: are you writing Chapter 5? Really looking forward to it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

For the love of god... Part 5 please

mattpantyhosemattpantyhose3 months ago

The story might feel slightly a bit too serious at times, if one comes here expecting to read just porn. But it just means that you managed to describe the character's feelings and motivations really well. There might've been less "meat" this time, but the backstory is written really well, and so is the whole emotional side of the story. Well done!

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I am still very much an amateur at this, but I find it flattering to have others take an interest or note my efforts. I write what interests me, and I assume if I find a story interesting, then likely at least a few others will, also. If you share my interests, come along f...