You don't tell stories; you write scenes. You don't develop, you insert.
Grow up a great deal, then try again. The number of people who enjoy your work to want to read it again so follow you is proof of what I'm telling you.
Twisted by childhood incest and adult sexual spin-out, this aspiring writer takes power by rewriting her stories - focusing on good feelings and excitement of taboo. Turning trauma around, this writer spins stories and fantasies with better sexier twists.