All Comments on 'An Older Virgin Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great read it reads better than An Older Virgin, Keep working at it 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Pleased you are doing this looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Glad you brought this back 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Not bad. I didn’t see any bit errors, you might need help with the general flow. Unfortunately, I don’t know what to suggest.

I’d like to read more, even without editing. Foursome sounds interesting. πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘©πŸ»β€πŸ¦³πŸ‘§πŸ»πŸ‘©πŸ½β€πŸ¦°

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Love the stories except the Jo becoming a whore at the clinic part. Don't like that at all.

laughdruidlaughdruid5 months ago

What an excellent story, 4 chesty mostly bi women would make a great harem. Please write about jo's customers requests.

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