by jd8406
Not bad. I didnβt see any bit errors, you might need help with the general flow. Unfortunately, I donβt know what to suggest.
Iβd like to read more, even without editing. Foursome sounds interesting. ππ©π»βπ¦³π§π»π©π½βπ¦°
5*
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Love the stories except the Jo becoming a whore at the clinic part. Don't like that at all.
What an excellent story, 4 chesty mostly bi women would make a great harem. Please write about jo's customers requests.