All Comments on 'An Opportunity Not To Be Missed Ch. 18'

Great story... well written... not too long and not too short... it's SOOOOOOOOOOO much better than most of the crap that is posted here. Thanks for sharing !

Great Chapter Bambigirl. I'm not too big on the stories that involve Alison, but they are still awesome. I just can't wait to see the next debasement of Mandy. Oh please make it disgusting! Looking forward to the next Chapter. Quick quick please!

and she is excited by that? BULLSHIT ---At that point it should have been shot in the balls

Dear Mandy

From the staff here at Erotic publishing, we would like to congratulate your phenomenal series. We were referred by a fan, and are watching keenly, on the following chapters. Simply fantastic writing, and continue the well thought out plots. Superb.

would like to see mandy being paired with an exchange student coming from some place like asia india and allowed to do anything to mandy.....it wud be his dream come true....

Great story;I am off to check out your other work!

Excellent writing skills. Love to see Mandy with a retard or fat indian. Would love to see her on the bed, and have him cum on her face, while she hates it. Again Chapter 5 was the best in upskirt. It is best when she does it unintentionally. Have more of this, as it was an excellent thought in the beginning. Marvelous when you describe their clothing. That is the crux of your entire stories. Very smart.

Force Mandy to have sex with a midget. You can use some great upskirt scenes here. Have her wear a short, denim torn mini skirt. She could bend on the couch, showing her ass, when he walks in. Admiring the sight. Love to see this.

Or. Have her dressed in a short white nurse outfit. He could be under the table watching her panties, whilst shes reading. Then he could look under her skirt, whilst she stands.

I agree. Love to see more unintentional upskirts. Wearing white panties. She could wear black mini and white stockings. Yellow skirt. White frilly mini, working the in the kitchen. While this midget sees everything, and see's to dumb to realize it. Or the white nurse uniform. While she's reading, under the desk. Even the mini torn jeans. Have her bend over on the couch. Nice.

Isnt it a good idea to have Mandy meet some of her fans at the videostore where her video's are sold? I like the ideas mentioned below / a midget or a retard. Degrade the poor girl! She is a unvolentary pornstarlet - she cant stay innocent for ever!

I absolutely love this series!! This is just the type of story that get me sooo wet. How about Peter taking Mandy into a pub full of dirty old men... He should be in control of her and not let her wear a bra, then have her expose herself to the old men and let them feel her up mmmm

Oh My Goodness! Your stories are so awesomely nasty!