All Comments on 'An Unorthodox Sales Contest Ch. 07'

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boaman007boaman007over 11 years ago
Excellent

Great story thanks for sharing! Looking forward to more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Drifting

this story started out using humiliation and shame as motivation and quickly turned into a cluster fuck with no real humiliation. IMHO this is a major shortcoming of so many stories they lose focus and thus creditably..

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