All Comments on 'Andrew and the Ring Ch. 02'

by ZachDocEight

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Anonymous5 months ago

You have some good ideas (albeit on an old theme), but the execution is a little adolescent and tedious to read. After 126 stories, perhaps it’s time to find a good editor who can improve your writing - not a proof reader.

Anonymous5 months ago

great series more please!! your amazing the way you write!!!

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